Hey @Matt as a technical test, I think this is a great idea. You can see the limitations of your technology / setup, and you can see that you need to change some stuff to make it easier to hear you.

TBH I opened it because I wanted to see / hear you play, but this wasn't that.

From a teaching perspective I think you should aim to say (and ideally show) what you're going to offer in the first 30 seconds.
Your first 30-60 seconds didn't tell me much here. I listened for about 3 mins, then skipped in and saw you edited some stuff, which told me a lot more. When I didn't hear music I moved on.

I basically think you should keep doing these and get feedback from people who want to use tools / instruments like loopdrop.
Maybe ask people directly - what do you want to know how to do? I think teaching someone in person could teach you a bunch of this if you haven't already done it.?